1. I love the background and typeface you chose for your title. One suggestion would be to organize the numbers for the years in the same way so that it doesn’t look jumbled across the poster. Overall, I think your poster looks great and it is very well done. You can tell that you spent a lot of time on it.

  2. The background works beautifully with all the textures to come together in harmony, I only have an issue with the timeline of all the years in the center. It appears a bit jumbled, maybe a different typeface similar to your titles or adding some texture to it could be more effective.

  3. I love the textures you utilized to parallel the type design with the background. Together this has a construction feeling that is very unorganized in a chaotic beautiful way. The type on the body text is a sans-serif which somewhat vibrates with everything else going on when you try to read it in smaller print. Possibly using a sans-serif would help with this. Overall though, it all works very unique and well thought out.

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