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  1. Not only did I enjoy your presentation, but I also really love your timeline design. I think the large bold letters and color scheme play very well together and embody the movement. As Professor Strong mentioned in class, I think the information itself would be easier to read if it wrapped around the “constructivism” text horizontally instead of every which way. If you wrapped the text to resemble the monument picture you showed us in class, I think it would look a little more organized and readable. One other small critique would be to make your paragraph a tad bigger, as it’s hard to read at the size you have it at now. Besides those suggestions, I think you nailed the concept and execution! Great job!

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