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  1. I absolutely love your concept for the timeline of this period. It can be hard with how general the 16th Century topic is to come up with something that is effective and efficient, but I think your concept has a ton of promise. A couple of things I would tweak to make this concept even stronger is the background color and text alignment. The background is just a little two dark, which makes the foreground of the poster not stick out as much. I would recommend lightening up the background color to make your text and illustration pop. Also, some of your text alignment is off (either too close or too far way from the lines of the illustration), and the title text looks awkward with the “and” all alone in the middle line. I think those little critiques would make your already-great concept even better! Great job with the presentation as well!

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