1. I really like the way you approached your timeline. I think including small examples in the gray of each circle was really smart and is visually pleasing. My main suggestion would be to make the text stand out more. For me, some of it gets lost in the pictures behind it. But overall, I love the simplicity and color scheme.

  2. The graphic concept of circles is appealing, and I quite like the notion of watching the “a” evolve. The color scheme is almost too subtle but workable and pleasant. Insofar as weaknesses, 1) the background image and its relevant content compete too much and create a cluttered feel, 2) the title feels neglected and cast aside, and 3) the overall impact is a bit lukewarm. I would improve readability of the text and find a way to add a bit of punch overall.

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