1. You did a really great job putting a lot of information on your timeline without making it feel over crowded. It’s really easy to read and understand. The only thing I might change is the size of your description of Bauhaus. I feel like it is so much smaller of an element that it’s importance isn’t really recognized. Really good job other than that!

  2. This timeline really screams bauhaus, so nice job with that and I like the information you decided to use. The use of the swirled line-thing was a nice use of the signature bauhaus shape and I really like the continued grey line by the art deco block. The only thing I would debate changing is switching the order, because I was expecting the oldest information to be at the top.

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