1. I think your timeline reflects the period well and I think the your color palette is well chosen. I like the unique concept of the timeline and how it is intertwined with the floral imagery. The only note I would make is to change the color of the paragraph at the bottom because it’s a little hard to read.

  2. I think that this timeline is very pretty and definitely represents everything that you presented on in class. To me, it doesn’t necessarily read as a timeline, so I think that you could work on that a little bit. The colors are really pretty and putting the text in white helps it to stand out and be important. I would say maybe just make some of the text bigger and read more as a timeline. But overall, really good job and the poster is really pretty!

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