1. Yen, you did a fantastic job of making sure your timeline reflected the movement you were assigned. The colors, typography and images you chose all follow the elements of the art deco movement really closely. I think it could have benefited from the use of a different typeface for the body of the text where you explain the movement and the information under the dates because it gets hard to read in large chunks.

  2. Yeni, I love the colors you chose for your timeline. I also love that you have a strong focal point and the information about your movement is right there. I love the typeface you chose for headings, but I think that you should choose a different typeface for your descriptions so that it is easier to read.

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