katerigemperleinschirm

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  1. Kateri~
    I think this is a great start! If I have to critique, I think it needs more oomph, and more flow. Maybe doing something fun with the dates or make the text have interesting movement, rather than a very structured grid.
    I like the color scheme and the font choice. {Don’t forget to add a description of your movement on your poster.}

  2. I love this poster because it’s so clean, and I think you embodied different elements of Swiss International Style well. I feel like you could push this design further, though. I love the overlapping colors at the top – perhaps you could make that a more prominent aspect of the poster?

    You’re off to a really great start! I just think this could use a little more embellishment/development.

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