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  1. I like your work a lot! They are so consistent and pleasing to look at. The colors is a good choice, simple but catchy. Really like the idea of displaying all characters in a clean text box throughout the two pages on page 6 and 7. It is an effective way to compare the light and bold styles, and also creates a relaxing pacing page.
    The only thing I think it can improve is in the “boo-boo” page, the hanging first line looks not related to the other two text blocks.
    It is a really cool piece!

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