shawnarabbas

3 Comments

  1. I love this colors you used here! I love the simplicity of it and how easy it is to read. My only criticism would be to maybe make the dates stand out a little more. The typeface is a bit small.

  2. Your design looks really great, but what I love most about it is how clear it is. I had no problem following it and it was really effective as a timeline. I also love your colors and the diagonal concept! One thing I noticed was the placement of the dates in the larger circles— they seemed a little off-center to me. Good work though!

  3. This approach is appealing and easy to follow. The colors are pleasing, the text succinct. I have only a few suggestions: 1) the white dots at the end of the lines are a tad large in relation to the text, 2) the rotation of text and lines does not appear consistent, 3) consider placing the white dot below so that it appears as a period, 4) and play a bit more with the date circles to see if maybe there is a color combo that would create a bit more contrast and interest. I’m not saying I don’t like it as it is, I just think there might be an even better solution.

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