jackiereilly

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  1. I love your red, white, and black color palette and I also LOVE your cover. I it very attractive and makes the viewer look at the letters in a different way. One thing you might consider is having a little bit more white space on some of the pages so that there is a little more breathing room.

  2. I love that you had a variety of different sized type on each page, you were able to really show off the letter forms and add some visual interest. I also really like the alphabet page you did; that diagonal line of pink text was genius. Another small thing, on the pages when the text is small and pink on a black background, I found it a little hard to read. Maybe consider increasing the size a little, or maybe make the text white and make the larger elements pink. Great work, Jackie!

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