Your peacock is probably the most gorgeous animal I’ve ever seen. I remember saying to the people sitting next to me in class that I wanted to hire you to make my future wedding dress look that beautiful! I think that your eagle is the weakest out of the series. This might be due to the fact that you used a rigid sans serif to portray a bird in motion. I think that the wings need a curvier feel to get this point across more clearly. Well constructed, just might need a different choice of typeface to be portfolio-worthy! :)
Your peacock is probably the most gorgeous animal I’ve ever seen. I remember saying to the people sitting next to me in class that I wanted to hire you to make my future wedding dress look that beautiful! I think that your eagle is the weakest out of the series. This might be due to the fact that you used a rigid sans serif to portray a bird in motion. I think that the wings need a curvier feel to get this point across more clearly. Well constructed, just might need a different choice of typeface to be portfolio-worthy! :)