1. I love this! The design you did in the background along with the color palette is just great. Very clean and easy to follow. The only thing I would say is that for the page with the “K” and the two quotes on the left side, I would maybe make the type a bit smaller. I find that my eyes keep going back and forth between the pages looking for a place to rest, but because the quotes are long and the type is big, and the “K” is very big as well, it is just a little bit overpowering. But that is minor, you did a great job!

  2. I really enjoy the direction you took the assignment in. I love the running theme throughout the specimen and how it included fun and interesting quotes. I think my favorite detail was the background templates on each slide. It is very obvious that you put a good amount of thought into the design and it shows through. You did a great job of giving a voice to the typeface.

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