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This is an incredible specimen. You did a really amazing job in choosing such a fantastic typeface and then an ever better job in displaying it. I think we discussed most of the flaws in class last week (there are not many, dont worry), but I would just like to reiterate what we said. I think you could benefit from focusing on the weights of the type – in certain places the emphasis seems a little bit heavy handed. I think you’re an excellent designer and this specimen is proof, so I trust that you will be able to spot what it is that I’m talking about as you make corrections. Really amazing job, incredible work.
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